About 2013 years ago, when Jesus was born, there was another big event on other planet. Event about gods of planet. Gods and goddesses of each planet lived that time. There were Mercurius, who's smallest but also bravest, Venuses,sister of Earl and the beauty, Earl the the most beautiful, Marius, husband of Earl, Jupitius and Saturius, who are big bullies, Uranius, and Neptunius.
Earl the planet of Earth was about born a baby called Jesus Christ. By the way, Earl's husband was Marius.They loved each other because they were similar and close very much. Earl had to give birth to Jesus, so she just took a rest. But 2 villains, Jupitius and Saturnius, the big bullies, always wanted to kill Marius and have Earl because she was really beautiful. She was like blue marvel. People in Korea knew how beautiful the Earl is, so they made a board game called "Blue Marvel" and it's popular. Anyway, When Marius when for the hunt to prepare his dinners ingredients, Jupitius and Saturnius ran in to Marius' house and kidnap Earl.
When Marius came in to his house, there were nobody. He thought Earl went out for a walk, so he waited and waited. 3 days later, Marius found out that she was kidnapped.
He started to worry, and he ran all the town to find Earl. He asked to all the gods, except Jupitious and Saturnius. He thought they captured her because Marius knew that they were bad guys.
He asked to the Sunny, god of the Sun and also king of planet gods. She said that she saw Earl and 2 bullies going to another galaxy, but she didn't know which galaxy was.
Marius couldn't find all 500 billion(the maximum), so he was about to give up. But 2 bullies
were actually in Milky Way galaxy. What happened?
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ReplyDeleteYou were very creative using planets as your characters with endings turning them into good and bad stars. It is useful introducing characters in the main story including a title for your story. Keep up the good work :)
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